Due Wednesday 9/24/08 or Thursday 9/25/08

1. Correct your narrative according to the marks
that I put on your paper. If you saved the narrative,
then you can make the corrections on the screen. If
you did not save it, then you can retype the paper and
make the corrections. If there is anything marked that
you do not understand or cannot read, please see me BEFORE
the next class period so that you can have your
corrected narrative ready to hand in. Hand in BOTH copies:
the corrected essay on top, the marked copy below.
DO NOT hand in the prewriting or the outline.
2. EXTRA CREDIT - If you would like to earn extra points
to add to your test score on the Capitals, Apostropes,
and Quotation Marks test,do this: Type Review Test 2 on
page 543. Do not use any examples from the text. You will
receive three add-on points for this exercise. Type
Review Test 1 on page 555. Underline the corrections that
you make to each sentence. You will receive three add-on
points for this exercise. Type Review Test 2 on page 564.
Staple one comic strip to your paper. You will receive
four add-on points for this exercise.
3. Read page 90 "Common Methods of Introduction." Select
one of the methods and type an introductory paragraph
for this thesis sentence: The food servings at fast food
establishments should be regulated for health purposes.
The introductory paragraph should be three to five sentences
long, and the thesis sentence should be the LAST SENTENCE in
the paragraph.