Thursday, August 28, 2008

Fall Semester 2008, Tuesday Class Due on 9/02

1. Complete Diagnostic Test C. remember to enter my
email [hcastil@templejc.edu] so that I will receive
the test results.
2. Type a draft of your interview.
3. Hand in your Confidential Information Sheet.

Fall Semester 2008: W class Assignment DUE on 9/03

1. Hand in the Confidential Information Sheet.
2. Go to www.mhhe.com/langan/diagonstics, click on
Diagnostic C on the left column, and take the test.
Remember to enter my email [hcastil@templejc.edu] so
that I will receive a copy of the test results.
3. Read pages 25-33 "Prewriting." Know the five
prewriting techniques.
4. Read pages 33-39 and TYPE the answers to these questions:
(1) On page 35, what does "Revising" mean? (2)On page 35,
what are the three questions that you ask in Revising Content?
(3) On page 37, what do you do when you Edit your essay?
5. Read the sample of a revised student essay highlighted
in yellow on pages 37-39.
6. Hand in the final copy of the interview.

Friday, April 4, 2008

Due Tuesday, 4/08/08

1. Using your outline on religion, write a complete essay
of 500-600 words(intro paragraph ending with the thesis sentence),
support paragraphs (each beginning with a topic sentence
that supports the thesis sentence), and a closing paragraph
(see pages 93-95 - do NOT begin this paragraph with "In
conclusion" or "In closing"). You can change your outline
if you get a better idea. You should submit your essay
to SmarThinking to get suggestions on improving the
essay. Hand in the papers in this order: 1. The outline,
2. The final copy; 3. Draft with changes; 4. Comments from
SmarThinking if you submit it.

2. Study the confusing words that we discussed in class. I
will give you a long paragraph to revise using these words.
If you find an error, you'll correct it. If the word is used
correctly, you'll leave it as it is.

3. Using your textbook and your class notes, evaluate the
sentences that are on the handout. Each sentence will be
identified as A. Fragment; B. Fused Sentence; C. Comma
Splice; or D. Correct Sentence. A good way to do this is
to try to correct the error that you identify. In class today,
you will also have a test over similar sentences with
similar errors.
4. If you have any questions, see me, call me, or email me.

Monday, March 17, 2008

Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Due Thursday 3/13/08

1. The next miscellaneous writing is due. On this
writing, print the draft and make corrections on the
draft. I won't accept the writing if I do not see
that the draft has corrections marked on it.
2. Read textbook pages 455-467, ""Fragments."
On page 467, complete Review Test 2.
Underline fragments and write corrections in
the book. You may type the exercise if you do not
want to write in the book.
3. Think about Spring Break, March 16-22.

Thursday, March 6, 2008

Tuesday, 3/11/08

1. Since we did not have time for the test on
modifiers, study all your sources for the
test we will have on 3/11/08.
2. Read textbook pages 222-231 "Exemplification."
In this method of writing, you support your thesis
sentence by giving specific examples. Your thesis
sentence could be "My best firend is not very
disciplined." One example could be that he puts
off dioing assignments until the night before they are
due. Another example could be that uses his credit
to buy items that he doesn't need. A third example could
be that he is easily talked into doing things he
doesn't really want to do.On page 239, several qualities
listed under Writing Assignment 2. Select one of the
qualities and develop an outline that gives three
examples that illustrate that quality.
3. Read textbook pages 509-514 "Pronoun Types." Complete
Review Test 1 on page 515 or type it.

Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Thursday, 3/06/08

1. Study for a test on Parallelism.
Review the class notes, text notes, and
the OWL from Tuesday's assignment.
2. Your next Miscellaneous Writing is due.
3. Be abvle to explain Misplaced Modifiers
and Dangling Modifiers. What is the difference?
4. Type each of these numbered sentences as they appear
on this page.If the sentence contains a
modifier error, retype a CORRECTED VERSION
directly below the incorrect one. If the sentence is
corect as is, do not retype it. Be sure
to number each sentence as it is on this page.
THIS IS A TEST.
1. I nearly napped for twenty minutes during class.
2. Tired and examperated, the boys' fight was harmless.
3. While riding a bicycle, a dog chased Michael for an hour.
4. At the age of twelve, the boy genius earned a college degee.
5. Although very expensive, the fur coat looked like a fake.
6. Frozen shrimp lay in the steel pans that were thawing rapidly.
7. The woman picked up a heavy iron skillet with arthritis.
8. Marta told Ron that she would marry him last Friday.
9. While reading the newspapers, my dog sat with me on the porch.
10. The widow ran the farm after her husband died with the
help of two farmhands.
11. Munching leaves from a tall tree, the children watched a giraffe.
12. Not having had much sleep, my concentration was weak during class.
13. Over flowing with garbage, Gren could not find room for her
trash in the dumptster.
14. As a new student, the French test seemed impossible to pass.